So, lets look at a few typical examples of bad profiles: “I am not good at writing about myself, but my friends say that I am intelligent, professional, educated and ambitious. I am looking to a meet an intelligent, beautiful woman for dating and relationship.” – at first, this looks like a well-written profile by a guy who seems to have head on his shoulders. There is nothing “catchy” about this profile – there is nothing that would compel a reader to stop and respond to it.
However, it has one major flaw that will make many women skip over it. Lets look at another bad profile: “I went to school in the east coast, but now I work for a major software company where I work up the corporate ladder. I love hiking, watching baseball, and bbq on weekends.” – the writer must be reminded that this is a dating profile – not a resume or a sales presentation in front of his human resources department. as a rule, you should never start your profile by talking about school or work, as it’s not interesting and not really relevant to what you should be trying to achieve – to catch a woman’s attention.” “I love to have fun, party, dance, and drink of my buddies.
I fully don't expect you to message me, I guess if I was getting 20 or 30 messages a day from people I wouldn't have to.
Unfortunately real, honest guys like me often get passed over because we don't stand out among the hundreds on here trying to find a date by auto-blasting e-mails they have stored up on a hard drive.
Some guys think they need to have a funny online dating profile. So start out with something that makes it look like you’re already friends… You’re looking to show her that you’re confident, enjoying life, picky, and fun.
I just want them to get attracted and curious and email me. You want your profile to be fun and conversational.
I am a big fan of learning what’s a good through making a contrast between good and bad.
If you wanna hang out sometimes, holler at me…” – unless you are in a fraternity, you should never come across as someone who has nothing else to him but getting drunk and leading a lifestyle devoid of any real goals or ambition.
Now, lets look at an example of a profile that will stand out through both the way they are written and their content.
Good Generic Example #1 Let's face it, I don't live the life of a rock-star or famous athlete ...
but those guys are always getting caught cheating on their wives, so why would I want to live that life?